>>>So he just came on your back? Jesus…
>No, I was facing him when he came, I was rinsing my hair
. >Sounds good, I will talk to you later.
. So Saturday came around and I put on my usual, long shorts and a what I thought was a smart t-shirt, picked up my money that I’d got out of the bank the previous day, I reckoned £180 would be plenty to get a some new stuff. This is my first story and I would greatly appreciate as many comments as possible, so once you've read it please comment on what you thought, good or bad
>>>So he just came on your back? Jesus…
>No, I was facing him when he came, I was rinsing my hair
. >Sounds good, I will talk to you later.
. So Saturday came around and I put on my usual, long shorts and a what I thought was a smart t-shirt, picked up my money that I’d got out of the bank the previous day, I reckoned £180 would be plenty to get a some new stuff. This is my first story and I would greatly appreciate as many comments as possible, so once you've read it please comment on what you thought, good or bad
>>>So he just came on your back? Jesus…
>No, I was facing him when he came, I was rinsing my hair
. >Sounds good, I will talk to you later.
. So Saturday came around and I put on my usual, long shorts and a what I thought was a smart t-shirt, picked up my money that I’d got out of the bank the previous day, I reckoned £180 would be plenty to get a some new stuff. This is my first story and I would greatly appreciate as many comments as possible, so once you've read it please comment on what you thought, good or bad
